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Impressing You

As I sit at my table Hoping to write Words fail me Yet, my thoughts teem Not a bit a one right I am unable... I wish to express an impress... There was nothing wrong Wrong with my heart. As wrong as it is Until you came A strange flame Singed my soul Like a firing dart It was a love wrong. I wish an expressive impress I am unable... My heart is heavy As of the debt of a huge levy. My soft spot indulge a pain The run of a train on rail. I wish an express impress But I sell you my stress. I can't but...

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Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 8/5/2013 8:41:00 AM

Wonderful and lovely piece,Lanre...Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest....

Goodness Lanre
Date: 8/14/2013 9:15:00 AM

Thanks AO. You are my encouragement. GL

Len Gasun

Date: 8/5/2013 6:46:00 AM

An awesome piece which really deserved its great win! CONGRATULATIONS my dear friend, Goodness! Thank you so much for sharing as well. And since somebody sent me a message, i'm passing it to you, Happy Friendship Day! love lots & hugs, Leonora

Goodness Lanre
Date: 8/14/2013 9:18:00 AM

Thanks friend. I am always encouraged by your stopping by. xxx GL.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/4/2013 10:10:00 PM

Goodness, Congratulations, with your winning poem..... goodnight~ Linda

Goodness Lanre
Date: 8/14/2013 9:21:00 AM

Thanks PD.

Skat A

Date: 8/4/2013 5:26:00 PM

enjoyed...SKAT

Goodness Lanre
Date: 8/14/2013 9:23:00 AM

Skat, thanks. GL.