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Impress Me Son

IMPRESS ME SON Brevity is the span of life, it is so short ; But linear is victory without any short-cut. The world you see now is a battle field ; Doggedness is the only mean to the yield. A hand that sowingly itself deceives; Cries in vain upon what it later receives. Be not a leaner but self reliant; Hunt not fly nor ant but kill the giant. Remember,the whole world is yours; Limitation is in nowhere but in us. Impress me son now that I may smile; That I may be proud of you in Niger or Nile. Behold, you are the last leg of my race; Fail not son, in your hand is the ace. User’s name : Kayod5. Contest : Impress me ll !. Sponsor : Giorgio V.

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Date: 2/10/2014 1:02:00 AM
A heartfelt one! Congrats on your win, Kayode5.
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Date: 2/10/2014 5:39:00 AM
Thank you my brother ; one love.
Date: 2/5/2014 12:24:00 AM
IT impressed me too and congrats on the win, kayod5
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Date: 2/5/2014 9:04:00 AM
Thank yor Dr. for your watchful eyes upon your student. Kayod5.
Date: 2/1/2014 1:23:00 PM
Very inspirational....I really liked this...thank you....
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Date: 2/1/2014 1:52:00 PM
An angel visits me today,I shall give my thanks to Donna Jones, I shall sing sweet song for her ; something tells me: blessed she is among the poets. Immense thanks for your commendation, have a fun filled weekend and a rewarding week ahead. Kayod5
Date: 2/1/2014 6:53:00 AM
This is an impressive write my friend! You have written a glorious poem this morning! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/1/2014 7:26:00 AM
Thank you Russell for your commendation,have wonderful weekend. Kayod5.
Date: 2/1/2014 4:28:00 AM
Wonderful sonnet, Kayod5
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Date: 2/1/2014 5:53:00 AM
Thank you Dr. ; have a lovely weekend. Kayod5.
Date: 2/1/2014 2:50:00 AM
This is very good. It flows so well...Tim
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/1/2014 3:14:00 AM
Immense thanks Tim Smith,you have made me a super Saturday. Stay blessed. Kayod5

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