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Impress Me

This I shall do in time with a rhyme impress me you say But I say nay Who is to say what will impress the mighty poet master reads As if we could all impress you as you wish with a click Then it would not be as hard or to quick with all this wit But I will try with all my might I will give it a good fight As I try to impress you with all that I have I come up short I must report it is where I fall I thought I would stand tall When put on the spot I can not This I must admit is where I bow out For I have just blow my spout Tricia Bernard 10/7/2014

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Date: 1/15/2015 2:26:00 PM
I think you managed to impress us all with this clever write Patricia - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/15/2015 11:57:00 AM
Patricia you impressed me. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/14/2015 10:52:00 PM
Patricia, Stopping by to say hi and wish you the best when it comes to any soup contest. Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "A Penny For Your Thoughts." If you'd like:) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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