Impress Me

This I shall do in time with a rhyme impress me you say
But I say nay
Who is to say what will impress the mighty poet master reads
As if we could all impress you as you wish with a click
Then it would not be as hard or to quick with all this wit
But I will try with all my might 
I will give it a good fight
As I try to impress you with all that I have I come up short
I must report it is where I fall I thought I would stand tall
When put on the spot I can not
This I must admit is where I bow out
For I have just blow my spout


Tricia Bernard
10/7/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Allison Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 2:26 PM
I think you managed to impress us all with this clever write Patricia - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 11:57 AM
Patricia you impressed me. Congratulations on your win.
A   Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 10:52 PM
Patricia, Stopping by to say hi and wish you the best when it comes to any soup contest. Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "A Penny For Your Thoughts." If you'd like:) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace