Impress Me

Impress me

So impress me,

tell me something new,

not the fairy tail I all ready know,

I am the one,

you need to impress now

so tell me the story

tell me the truth,

tell me something new,

that you even didn't know,

So,impress me

I am open to you're heart.

And will listen the tone of you're voice

will let you in my heart.

So impress me with something completely new, 
out of the blue.

Ivy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Vresk Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 5:44 PM
I love this one mommy. (: It's my favorite.
Vresk Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 8:17 PM
thank you mila, mom
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 5:08 PM
Lovely written poem here!!!
Vresk Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 8:18 PM
thank you dear Pace,Ivy
Vresk Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 2:31 PM
Thanx,dear friend,for your time and comment,Ivy
Desai Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 2:22 AM
This has the makings of a beautiful song, do you make music?
Vresk Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 2:31 PM
thank you dear Sameer for taking time to read my work,I appreciate your comment,Ivy
Loving Iii Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 10:52 AM
been there done that.
Vresk Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 2:29 PM
dear John thank you for stopping by,Ivy
K Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 7:32 PM
Impressive poem! :)
Vresk Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 2:28 PM
thank you dear Jessica,for taking time to read my work,I appreciate your comment,Ivy
Long Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 6:03 PM
Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it.
Vresk Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 2:26 PM
thank you for stopping by, I appreciate your comment ,Ivy
Andresen Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 2:32 PM
Like this poem Ivy, tell the truth...yes. - oxox Anne-Lise
Vresk Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 3:29 PM
thank you Anne,Ivy
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