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Impending Verve

On misty waters Beholding sharp brilliant force I wait the coming Guiding Light--Contest Poem Sponsored by: Raul Moreno

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/22/2010 12:03:00 PM

I have been reading some wonderful poetry today here at the Soup. I am so happy your poetry is among those I have read Cecil. Wishing you the best in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/22/2010 8:13:00 AM

This is a beauty!!!! Loved it !

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/21/2010 10:38:00 PM

Good luck in the contest. Nicely expressed.

Kim M

Date: 4/21/2010 7:58:00 PM

"Beholding sharp brilliant force" is a superb description of the fierce strength/power of the light source -- something REALLY BIG coming. Made me think of the Almighty's second coming or possibly a UFO with supernatural shards of light, or I suppose a huge barge with all new light blubs!!!! I really enjoyed this poem.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/21/2010 6:58:00 PM

I really like the sense of expectancy in this poem, Cecil. You have set a compelling mood and did a great job creating the image in words. Best of luck in the contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Rick Parise

Date: 4/21/2010 5:50:00 PM

Very nice~ Enjoyed the nice Imagery~~Rick

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/21/2010 5:15:00 PM

Cecil, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul