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Impending Verve

On misty waters
Beholding sharp brilliant force
I wait the coming







Guiding Light--Contest  Poem
Sponsored by: Raul Moreno

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Carol Sunshine Brown

April 22, 2010 at 12:03 PM

I have been reading some wonderful poetry today here at the Soup. I am so happy your poetry is among those I have read Cecil. Wishing you the best in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

April 22, 2010 at 8:13 AM

This is a beauty!!!! Loved it !

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 21, 2010 at 10:38 PM

Good luck in the contest. Nicely expressed.

Kim M

April 21, 2010 at 7:58 PM

"Beholding sharp brilliant force" is a superb description of the fierce strength/power of the light source -- something REALLY BIG coming. Made me think of the Almighty's second coming or possibly a UFO with supernatural shards of light, or I suppose a huge barge with all new light blubs!!!! I really enjoyed this poem.

Carolyn Devonshire

April 21, 2010 at 6:58 PM

I really like the sense of expectancy in this poem, Cecil. You have set a compelling mood and did a great job creating the image in words. Best of luck in the contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn