Impatient Patient

My husband’s an impatient patient,
Though I cannot blame him,
For waiting to go home is something
I knew would inflame him.

But when you’re at the mercy of
Professions, you’re tethered
To all of their machines and tests,
Which leave you spent and weathered.

You sometimes gotta suck it up
And let them probe and poke you,
Despite the fact the bill you’ll get
Is guaranteed to soak you.

My husband’s an impatient patient,
Which, of course, is trying,
But lets me know, to my relief.
Today he won’t be dying.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Krutsinger Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 12:37 AM
I am an impatient patient too! Cannot wait to escape if I get into a hospital bed.
Wolf Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 6:15 PM
Soaked, but stlll fighting! Those hospitals are right down there with jails and nursing homes as Satellites of Hell above the ground! ~ Just sayin'
Mcintosh Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 6:36 PM
Brilliant. I just love this friend. God bless you always, love, Gina
Allison Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 4:59 PM
Hope he is back to full strength again soon Ilene - least our health care is free here (for now lol) hugs Jan xx
Turner Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 8:46 AM
Very funny, Ilene. If he's complaining, he's fine. LOL
Xiang Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 7:54 AM
Thank you. This is such a heartbreaking poem written in such a light and playful style. There is such wisdom in the marriage vow that we are bound till death do us part through sickness and in health. Well done.
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