Impatient Lover

impatient lover
white prehensile phalanxes 
smell of stale kisses













© RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY
12 DECEMBER 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kayode Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 2:37 AM
This is fantastic Rajat,something similar to deceit; a" 7" and a Fav,well done...huggs
Meade Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 9:39 AM
The hand of the lover and the death kiss! Nicely done sweet dear friend. Love always.
Bateman Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 8:13 AM
Rajat!! "Impatient Lover" say it ain't so!! A most interesting and descriptive Haiku my good friend. And a "7" too from me. All the best to you and your family!! Best Always, Gary
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