Immortality

Immortality Born into this chaotic world A soul is like a flickering flame So easily snuffed it struggles to live Yet its fires can never be tamed Candles may melt, their fuel may burn out But fire can easily spread One little spark can set all aflame Long after its lighter is dead Our flames are carried by those we have touched Our will can give others hope Together our fire can light up the night Alone we are ash and smoke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Michaels Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 5:23 PM
Nice Haiku, Aaron... certainly conjures up feelings of the season. Regards, John.
Schmitz  Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 3:14 AM
Um, you seem to have accidentally left a comment under the wrong poem and poet. I’m sure Aaron would love for you to leave a message under their poem...
Michaels Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 5:18 PM
A strikingly powerful piece, Edward. Great use of metaphors. Regards, John.
Schmitz  Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 3:20 AM
Thanks. This is one of my favorite poems... but then, I seem to like most of my own poems. (lol) I guess it’s easier to like a poem I fully understand.
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