The Grahamburglar Poet Kimo

Immortality

Immortality

By forge and hammer comes execution – 
death on an anvil’s cold steel.
To be granted new life.

10/11/16
Written for Contest:  ONE KIMO 10,7,6, Syllable Count ONE ONLY
Hosted by: Rick Parise

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Casarah Nance October 18, 2016 at 5:09 PM Oh well done, I like the hardness of this leading into the mold of newness. grats

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe October 17, 2016 at 12:05 AM Congratulations on your placement - I agree with Andrea, very deep write and well executed. Mark

Andrea Dietrich October 16, 2016 at 7:27 PM wow, that is a deep one. WELL DONE and congrats for the win.

Beautiful Scars October 16, 2016 at 2:15 PM lovely imagery and very deep, love it... Congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Paul Callus October 16, 2016 at 2:04 PM Ah! I love the creativity and poetic deliverance of this Kimo, Graham! Congratulations on your fine win. // paul

Anu Nayak October 16, 2016 at 1:54 PM Hearty congrats on your great win dear The Grahamburglar , lovely description of metallurgy of making new alloy, structure etc.., nicely penned kimo, enjoyed it!//love, Anu:)