Immortality

Immortality is what I feel when i'm with you 
as I want to live on forever
You my love were the mystery to my treasure.

You complete my life and I complete yours, 
As together we will open bright new doors.

As life goes on i'll still be with you,
And like a flower I cannot wait to see us bloom.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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December 28, 2022 at 6:36 AM
Thanks for sharing this. By God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy of Christmas and prosperous New Year along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
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