Immortal Love

Those red eyes shone,
like the light in the darkness.
As I walked in the middle of the night,
towards you in the full moon night.

Cling by immortality,
you seem too far to reach.
But I fell for death itself,
still I will never regret.

You smile as your fangs are shown,
you can make death my own.
Torn apart by time and flesh,
I try so hard but cannot control my lust.

You are my knight in black Armour,
save me my prince,save me from this place,
take me to your world,
with a sweet love bite make me yours,
                                              eternally.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 4, 2011 at 3:30 AM
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Cooke Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 5:38 PM
ooh the dark side of love, i like this a very sensual write, and a good poem
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