Premiere Contest WinnerImmortal Love

"Why think separately of this life than the next when one is born from the last? Time is always short for those who need it, but for those who love, it lasts forever." - Dracula Untold 

Love that faded in light of morn,
in bite of dusk, it was reborn. 
A parted leaf in gust of fall;
In spring, it flourished after all. 

A tale of love that is immortal;
Love is lasting, though heart is mortal. 
The fire of love will forever glow,
even if time will halt its flow. 

Where hands of time seem to be short,
a heart that loves finds its resort. 
Even if sank by hardest rain,
in bite of dusk, it will rise again. 

Even the bite of a bladed silver 
can't cause its verve to die forever.
Whether the sky is gray or blue 
nothing can kill a love that's true. 

February 28, 2023 

Strand Premiere No 1192 Poetry Contest (1st place) 
Sponsored By: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kauffman Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 10:49 AM
So tender and so loving Roger. Congratulations on your trophy win! Blessings to you.
Roger  Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 11:39 AM
Thank you very much... God bless too...
Emate Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 10:03 PM
A lovely poem. Congratulations!
Roger  Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 10:17 PM
Thank you very much...
Mcintosh Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 7:52 AM
Congratulations with this amazing writing! I just love it. God bless you, love - Gina
Roger  Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 11:45 AM
Thank you very much dear...
Agustin Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 9:56 PM
Wow! Congrats, Kabayan! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Roger  Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 10:43 PM
Thank you very much Kabayan...
Daniel Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 7:00 PM
Congratulations on a lovely poem, Roger, great win:)
Roger  Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 9:22 PM
Thank you very much...
Kitchin Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 4:20 PM
Roger, congratulations on your trophy win, wonderfully penned!
Roger  Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 5:55 PM
Thank you very much dear...
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