Immortal Love

Time was not in my favour,
Things were already beyond control,
So much lost was I in dilemma,
I lost the feel of my existence.

Twist of fate brought us close,
Neither of our souls, realized coming close.

I had always heard that distance leads relationships to worse,
Not in my case cause, it brought us close.

Now I feel you are a part of my quintessence,
My love who makes me dream,
My soul who makes my life a wonderfully peaceful,
My core that makes me contented.

Never will I cease to adore you,
Never will I cease to kiss you,
You are I love I longed for,
You’ll all be my baby I could die for.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 7:21 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 21, 2016 at 1:59 PM
hargobind marandi, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 26, 2015 at 6:38 PM
HARGOBIND, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE
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