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Immortal Grove

Withstanding heat waves, Withstanding the winter chill: The evergreens thrive.

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Elizabeth Neal

Date: 6/27/2009 10:23:00 AM

This is awesome good work. love Elizabeth

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/21/2009 3:02:00 PM

evergreens trees thrive and survive,immortal they are,they are strong pillars which we can depend on,i love their scent too,powerful and beautiful just like the immortal evergreens--brilliant--------------charma

Sean Matthews

Date: 6/21/2009 1:37:00 AM

The ways of mother nature sometimes reflect how organism survive in weather. Good poem; Sean

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/20/2009 8:32:00 PM

Yes, they do! It's been over 100 degrees every day this week and our evergreens are about the only things thriving. Great haiku, Raul! Hope work on your book is coming along well. Let us know when it's released so we can buy it! Love you, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/20/2009 8:27:00 PM

there's a lattitude on the drive into Northern Minnesota where you cross from the deciduous forest into the boreal forest of evergreen pines ... I breathe the air deeply and rejoice! you have captured this feeling, Raul