Immortal Grove

Withstanding heat waves,
Withstanding the winter chill:
The evergreens thrive.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Neal Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 10:23 AM
This is awesome good work. love Elizabeth
Chircop Avatar
June 21, 2009 at 3:02 PM
evergreens trees thrive and survive,immortal they are,they are strong pillars which we can depend on,i love their scent too,powerful and beautiful just like the immortal evergreens--brilliant--------------charma
Matthews Avatar
June 21, 2009 at 1:37 AM
The ways of mother nature sometimes reflect how organism survive in weather. Good poem; Sean
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June 20, 2009 at 8:32 PM
Yes, they do! It's been over 100 degrees every day this week and our evergreens are about the only things thriving. Great haiku, Raul! Hope work on your book is coming along well. Let us know when it's released so we can buy it! Love you, Carolyn
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June 20, 2009 at 8:27 PM
there's a lattitude on the drive into Northern Minnesota where you cross from the deciduous forest into the boreal forest of evergreen pines ... I breathe the air deeply and rejoice! you have captured this feeling, Raul
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