Immortal

Insanity drawing in on us,
measured by our lives in hell.
millions in an omnibus,
order, sinking, entropy.
renditions of a crumbling soul,
tumbling in to the abyss.
always taking draining tolls,
lingering for but a moment.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 4:58 AM
omnibus, insanity--democrat? just kidding. great write!!
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