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It was finally a sunny day after all the rain. Jeff Smith climbed back on his tractor again, Monday and the soft ground, was now mud. He hoped to pull that stump out with a thud. His mud-caked boot slipped off the clutch. The tractor lurched and backflipped as such. It now landed full force on Jeff’s chest. Laid in the soft mud, calling “save me” at his best. His two girls off for a walk, soon would’ve been, Out of ear shot and way too far to be seen. Hearing their Dad’s yells, they hurried to the scene. Transcendence set in and the two girls lifted it clean. Over one and a half ton pressing down on his chest. Haylee 14 and Hannah 16 with all their might not less, Lifted that tractor til he managed to escape its hold. Bruised, broken ribs, their dad will live to grow old. Medics say another few minutes his ribs would collapse. He would have died, there was no “perhaps” Some say an adrenalin rush, superhuman strength. It is beyond the normal or physical level at any length. What happened on that day in 2013 Minnesota USA There is no one that could explain it away. Spiritual power to achieve, was within each girl at that time. Not from muscle strength, intrinsic, in their minds, most sublime. . Immanent Yet Transcendent.

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Date: 10/6/2023 9:49:00 AM
Dear SV, Your poem is like a vivid painting that beautifully captures the depths of your emotions. You possess a rare talent for expressing yourself, making you a true poet. I extend my heartfelt congratulations to you for your well-deserved victory.
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Date: 10/21/2023 2:21:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend . Your words are extravagantly complimentary to say the least. I adore the way you make my humble poems seem so much more special than I deem them to be. Thank you so much, and please forgive the delay in my responding to you.
Date: 9/27/2023 1:23:00 AM
Had to delete my original as it had already been read by sponsor. This was from Bill Baker (I didn't want to lose his lovely words) Date: 9/26/2023 9:54:00 PM Flat out beautiful poetry, SV. A FAV for my list. Believe in miracles! I've experienced a couple myself. Love can give you super- human strength, physical, mental and emotional when a need arises and your open to helping, God may work through you. Thanks for sharing this (no pun intended) uplifting poem. Smiles ~ Blessing A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 9/27/2023 1:02:00 AM
The gorgeousness you are known for SV x
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Date: 10/21/2023 2:17:00 PM
Sweet friend, what would I do without you to brighten my day with a handful of words.? Thank you , and so sorry for the delay in responding.

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