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Written: November 03, 2023 __________________________________________ Pristine his soul and tamed to the core, Who was semaphored by a sloping wave? He escaped the safe harbor of the shore, And pushed by each coxswain and crave. God foretells a quaint future for humanity, The hidden channel for thinking and action. Beware of fools; this is a hazardous vanity, He sought sanctuary in the chilly reaction. Underground stars emerged victorious, And the ocean served as an awful grave. He is surely a compassionate star, glorious, People who pulled the cast first are brave. Their moorings have above welcoming past, Ventured out into the sea, lacking a map. Liberty is the root of every storm and blast, A span is the breadth of the Earth's sea gap. And their daily unrest is merely a brief respite, Mixed with man's untrustworthy spiritual kernel. Desires lacking a shore, hidden and desperate, Quite ardent, open to faith or clan air, eternal.

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Date: 11/4/2023 5:52:00 AM
The hidden channel for thinking and action. Beware of fools; this is a hazardous vanity---your words resonate with deep insights throughout this poem, my friend. Always a source of something unique and profound.
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Date: 11/4/2023 4:43:00 AM
dearest Sotto--your poem is an eloquent masterpiece, full of imagery and alliteration. It rhymically flowed, and I felt a host of emotions while listening to and reading your creation. This poem spoke to me about freedom, 'escaping the safe harbor of the shore.' Seeking freedom, especially inner freedom, has been a driving force in my life. Your understanding of the hugeness of that concept is deep, filled with understanding and compassion. I'm grateful for you and your creative spirt. Faving!
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Date: 11/4/2023 4:19:00 AM
Dear Sotto, your poems are always so profound and so well woven with not just brilliant diction but also with heartfelt thoughts and wisdom and imagery, that also reflects your empathetic soul, that conveys such emotions and truth in sheer eloquence! So many great lines in this and i especially loved “ And their daily unrest is merely a brief respite, Mixed with man's untrustworthy spiritual kernel“ so deep and soulfully deep exquisite with stunning alliterations and seamless metaphors! Fave
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Date: 11/4/2023 12:24:00 AM
You pulled all the strings to make this a wonderful poem. Studded with metaphors, alliteration and imagery makes it a wonderful poem. Blessings.
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