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Immaculate Snow

immaculate snow

adorning hills white as lace--

portrait in motion



Winter Haiku for Tania Kitchin's Contest
12/23/2018

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2018

snowwinterhaiku

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January 5, 2019 at 7:53 PM

Congrats on your win, nette.

December 28, 2018 at 7:19 PM

Your poetic words inspirit a lovely winter portrait of snow's purity and perfection, Nette. Splendid imagery! Warmest wishes to you for a happy new year.. ~Susan

December 25, 2018 at 10:05 AM

"portrait in motion" very well put Nette. Have a very Merry Christmas

December 25, 2018 at 4:24 AM

Immaculate imagery, Nette...it does make a striking portrait! Congratulations on your fine win. ~ Hope you are having a wonderful Christmas...Hugs // paul

December 24, 2018 at 10:13 PM

Congrats on your win with this 'moving portrait,' nette! Happy holidays! ~ Gershon

December 24, 2018 at 5:16 PM

CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Nette! Janice

December 24, 2018 at 2:13 PM

Very pretty imagery Nette, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

December 24, 2018 at 1:49 PM

Love the image of "white lace" you created, Nette. Congratulations on your win in Tania's contest! Best wishes for a Merry Christmas, Carolyn

December 24, 2018 at 1:41 PM

I liked the movement in your haiku, congratulations on your winning placement!

December 23, 2018 at 10:39 AM

Indeed, resplendent haiku. Nature's scenery in a dance!

December 23, 2018 at 7:09 AM

Immaculate imagery in your poem, nette. Best for a win.

December 23, 2018 at 4:04 AM

The moving winter landscape, a great inspiration for poets and artists alike. Good luck in the contest. Tom.

Mahtab Bangalee

December 23, 2018 at 3:34 AM

excellent words provide on purity of snow of winter/// nice haiku

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