Jeffrey Lee Poet Rhyme

Imagine That

If there was no crime
No hurry for time
No genocide
No homicide
If there was no mothers burying their sons
If mankind didn't invent guns
If schools still had prayer
If everybody recognize Jesus Christ as our savior
If there was love and respect
No hate between white and black
No homeless
No loneliness
No wars
No rich or poor
No accidents or disasters
If man only served one master (God)
Imagining is good for all it's worth
Heaven is definitely not planet earth

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December 1, 2016 at 1:36 PM lol XD

J Hamilton Gist January 27, 2016 at 6:18 PM I loved the word play my fellow poet... God loves witnesses of his loving kindness.

Trish Fernandez January 9, 2016 at 12:16 PM I like it.

Bl Devnath January 7, 2016 at 10:12 AM Loved your beautiful poem on imagination. i too imagine like that. i loved much "If man only.......(God). Loved always my lovely friend,bl

Joanna Daniel January 7, 2016 at 8:24 AM This is an excellent poem very well written. "If man only served one master (God)"- how great the world would become!!

Day Benway January 7, 2016 at 8:03 AM Very well done another 5 stars thanks for sharing

Steve Grammatico January 7, 2016 at 4:36 AM Reminds me of Lennon's "Imagine." Yes, we can imagine the world you describe, but as you indicate, reality bites.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia January 7, 2016 at 2:44 AM wow...what a profound thought..thoroughly loved this :)) rating...

Michelle Mac Donald April 18, 2009 at 8:46 AM Congratulations on being featured, Jeffrey! A beautiful write, the what "If" and the "No" mores. The world does feel topsy turvey..maybe we do "hurry for time", and rush past the importants. No, "Heavaen is not planet earth"...schools teach of the universe, but sadly, they have removed prayer. Best to you and yours...Mikki

Laura Mckenzie April 17, 2009 at 2:57 PM Very thought provoking write I wish all mankind could read this poem! Great write. Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

Ernilando Tugaff April 17, 2009 at 2:30 PM Jeffrey, congratulations on your featured poem this week. Mine was featured last week. Ernilando

Anthony Nutter April 17, 2009 at 3:31 AM Nice work and congratulations on your poem being featured.

Raul Moreno April 15, 2009 at 10:46 AM Congratulations on your feature of the week...Raul

Brandee Augustus April 14, 2009 at 2:02 PM Mind-blowing, refreshing Truth!!! Awesome poem and beyond a well deserved feature.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen April 14, 2009 at 1:03 PM It sounds like you have described Heaven. If we choose the right and allow our Lord Jesus Christ to guide us, we'll live in a place like that. Too bad we can't wave a magic wand and make everyone perfect.... Oh well, I guess we'll just make the best of what we have for now. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week.

Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson April 14, 2009 at 5:28 AM Congradulations on being featured this week!!! it is fun being featured...Great poem, I am going to go read somemore of yours...mine is featured this week as welll....fellow souper Rhonda Kay

April 13, 2009 at 4:19 PM Blessings to you for sharing this inspirational poem with us. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown April 13, 2009 at 6:35 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jeffery. May you have many more featured in the future. Love, Carol

Aleera De La Keur April 13, 2009 at 6:06 AM If only it were that easy, congratulations on being featured this week....Aleera