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Imagine That

If there was no crime
No hurry for time
No genocide
No homicide
If there was no mothers burying their sons
If mankind didn't invent guns
If schools still had prayer
If everybody recognize Jesus Christ as our savior
If there was love and respect
No hate between white and black
No homeless
No loneliness
No wars
No rich or poor
No accidents or disasters
If man only served one master (God)
Imagining is good for all it's worth
Heaven is definitely not planet earth

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Date: 12/1/2016 1:36:00 PM

lol XD

J Hamilton Gist

Date: 1/27/2016 6:18:00 PM

I loved the word play my fellow poet... God loves witnesses of his loving kindness.

Trish Fernandez

Date: 1/9/2016 12:16:00 PM

I like it.

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/7/2016 10:12:00 AM

Loved your beautiful poem on imagination. i too imagine like that. i loved much "If man only.......(God). Loved always my lovely friend,bl

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/7/2016 8:24:00 AM

This is an excellent poem very well written. "If man only served one master (God)"- how great the world would become!!

Day Benway

Date: 1/7/2016 8:03:00 AM

Very well done another 5 stars thanks for sharing

Steve Grammatico

Date: 1/7/2016 4:36:00 AM

Reminds me of Lennon's "Imagine." Yes, we can imagine the world you describe, but as you indicate, reality bites.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia

Date: 1/7/2016 2:44:00 AM

wow...what a profound thought..thoroughly loved this :)) rating...

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 4/18/2009 8:46:00 AM

Congratulations on being featured, Jeffrey! A beautiful write, the what "If" and the "No" mores. The world does feel topsy turvey..maybe we do "hurry for time", and rush past the importants. No, "Heavaen is not planet earth"...schools teach of the universe, but sadly, they have removed prayer. Best to you and yours...Mikki

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 4/17/2009 2:57:00 PM

Very thought provoking write I wish all mankind could read this poem! Great write. Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 4/17/2009 2:30:00 PM

Jeffrey, congratulations on your featured poem this week. Mine was featured last week. Ernilando

Anthony Nutter

Date: 4/17/2009 3:31:00 AM

Nice work and congratulations on your poem being featured.

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/15/2009 10:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your feature of the week...Raul

Brandee Augustus

Date: 4/14/2009 2:02:00 PM

Mind-blowing, refreshing Truth!!! Awesome poem and beyond a well deserved feature.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/14/2009 1:03:00 PM

It sounds like you have described Heaven. If we choose the right and allow our Lord Jesus Christ to guide us, we'll live in a place like that. Too bad we can't wave a magic wand and make everyone perfect.... Oh well, I guess we'll just make the best of what we have for now. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week.

Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson

Date: 4/14/2009 5:28:00 AM

Congradulations on being featured this week!!! it is fun being featured...Great poem, I am going to go read somemore of yours...mine is featured this week as welll....fellow souper Rhonda Kay

Date: 4/13/2009 4:19:00 PM

Blessings to you for sharing this inspirational poem with us. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen