Robert Johnson Poet Rhyme

I'M Writing You Off

We're done for now I hope you see.
You're left field antics aren't for me.
The more you write the more I'm bored.
I truly do not understand, Good Lord!

The more I think, the more I feel.
What we have shared does not feel real.
When egos' search for reassurance.
You better have some good insurance.

The time has come and now we're through.
I'd get on with it if I were you.

For P. D.'s I'm breaking up with you contest.  Love you P. D. :)

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Debra Squyres August 30, 2014 at 12:15 PM Well, dog gone it... and I thought surely it would last ... hahahahha, and you know I'm kidding... Excellent !!! Belated congrats on this marvelous win !!!

Robert Lindley June 22, 2014 at 1:22 PM Congrats on your great win!!!!!

Skat A June 20, 2014 at 5:50 PM Robert, Congratulations..... Awesome break-up poem.... Love ~SKAT~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 19, 2014 at 11:45 PM Wow an amazing write Robert ! Congrats on great win ,, yes when who's clash ,, better take off !

Cecilia Macfarlane June 19, 2014 at 7:08 PM Excellent write and win Robert. Big congrats!

Casarah Nance June 19, 2014 at 6:08 PM Love that "when ego's search for reassurance you better have some good insurance" so unique and creative, I dig your poem grats on your win :)

Pandita Sietesantos June 19, 2014 at 7:03 AM Congratulations, Robert, on a well-deserved, big win! Excellent write! Warm regards.

Arlene Smith June 19, 2014 at 6:41 AM Congrats on a great win, Robert!.. The title could have won on its own. Very clever!!.. Hugs. Arlene

Dr.Ram Mehta June 19, 2014 at 6:38 AM Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest, robert

Poet Destroyer A June 19, 2014 at 12:50 AM this was Awesome Robert. lol... Writing me off,,, you can't do it just yet...LOL, I need my rhyming comments, back...:) .. Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA

Kelly Deschler June 18, 2014 at 11:21 PM I love that title, very clever!.... You did a great job with the contest theme, Robert. Good luck to you!

Andrea Dietrich June 16, 2014 at 3:08 PM WELL DONE, my friend. You an artist at breaking up. haha.

Tim Smith June 15, 2014 at 7:41 PM Nice one Robert...I think it needs to be less than 10 lines

Pandita Sietesantos June 15, 2014 at 7:09 PM This is an excellent way to do the breaking up clean and bloodless! Great write, Robert!