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I'M the Water In the Well

I'm the water in the well, captured and still Dwelling as I get my fill of infinite time to kill There isn't no flow or nowhere for me to go I can't even trickle, or meander slow Stagnation has set in like a darkened sky No one leans over wells these days to cry And if you want to speak about far falling tears I've not seen my wooden bucket for years

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Wendy Rycroft

Date: 2/28/2016 5:21:00 PM

Hope you write some more poems x your a very writer x

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 12/22/2015 7:22:00 AM

Hi again very funny hope you find your bucket xxxx lol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/27/2015 8:57:00 PM

Hi John WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Plant A Tree Poetry
Date: 9/28/2015 8:55:00 AM

Thank you

Skat A

Date: 9/27/2015 1:11:00 PM

John, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2015 9:11:00 AM

- Hey John :) - Welcome with your first poem here on P- Soup - Hope your stay will give you much pleasure - I've been here since 11/26/2011 ....... it is a pleasure to share poems and read what others write - I wish you good luck :) - Nice to "meet" you :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Miraj Raha

Date: 9/27/2015 8:46:00 AM

excellent capture of the well.