Get Your Premium Membership

I'M the Stellar Deer

No longer I needed, The ladder to climb; The space is wide open, The ascension is mine. A burning sensation, The splatters of stars; A jewel from Venus, Descends down my sight. The glittering mansion, Unfolds as I ride; With a group of observers, While journeying the night. Shapes of silver petals, An unknown frontier; The space is wide open, I'm the stellar deer.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/11/2021 10:55:00 PM
I feel like the Goddess Diana and her deer, in the sky, headed toward heaven with her flock! "The glittering mansion, Unfolds as I ride; With a group of observers, While journeying the night." Bravo!
Login to Reply
Tomeo Avatar
Walter D Tomeo
Date: 10/23/2021 3:17:00 PM
Thanks Caren for reading my poem with detail and enjoyment. You don’t know how much I am appreciative of your words and energy!!!! ??
Date: 2/29/2020 6:25:00 AM
Great poem Walter..
Login to Reply
Tomeo Avatar
Walter D Tomeo
Date: 2/29/2020 3:14:00 PM
Thanks so much! Very grateful for your comment!!! ??

Book: Reflection on the Important Things