Walter D Tomeo Poet Diamante

I'M the Stellar Deer

No longer I needed,
The ladder to climb;
The space is wide open,
The ascension is mine. 

A burning sensation,
The splatters of stars;
A jewel from Venus,
Descends down my sight.

The glittering mansion,
Unfolds as I ride;
With a group of observers,
While journeying the night.

Shapes of silver petals,
An unknown frontier;
The space is wide open,
I'm the stellar deer.

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Caren Krutsinger March 11, 2021 at 10:55 PM I feel like the Goddess Diana and her deer, in the sky, headed toward heaven with her flock! "The glittering mansion, Unfolds as I ride; With a group of observers, While journeying the night." Bravo! Walter D Tomeo October 23, 2021 at 3:17 PM Thanks Caren for reading my poem with detail and enjoyment. You don’t know how much I am appreciative of your words and energy!!!! ??

Silent One February 29, 2020 at 6:25 AM Great poem Walter.. Walter D Tomeo February 29, 2020 at 3:14 PM Thanks so much! Very grateful for your comment!!! ??