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I'M Telling You Why

At him I'll never shout Never make him cry In him I never doubt I'm telling you why...... He cuddles me when I'm sleeping He makes me smile when I'm awake He senses when I'm upset or sad He loves me for goodness sake At him I'll never shout Never make him cry In him I never doubt I'm telling you why..... He cooks all my favorite dishes He loves all my quirky ways He tells me I am beautiful He sets my heart ablaze At him I'll never shout Never make him cry In him I never doubt I'm telling you why..... He makes me feel very special He makes me laugh out loud He will be there for me always His feelings he'll never enshroud At him I'll never shout Never make him cry In him I never doubt I'm telling you why..... I will love him forever I will never let him go I will treasure every moment Together we'll keep our love aglow 12/25/2014

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Len Gasun

Date: 3/2/2015 9:49:00 AM

This is an awesome and delightful poem to read my dear friend, Cecilia. It's like a song. I love it and enjoyed so much. Thanks a lot for sharing! thanks a lot as well for your precious time reading one of my latest poems. More blessings to you! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/2/2015 3:28:00 PM

Thanks Leonara, glad you enjoyed. Hugs

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/1/2015 4:38:00 PM

Wow this is beautiful poetry, love the sincerity...glad i came by and read this..

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/2/2015 3:24:00 PM

Thanks Harry, glad you liked. : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/24/2015 6:39:00 PM

Hi, Sweetie, thanks for seeing my poem today.How are you doing?

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/2/2015 3:24:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, still as busy as ever, had only 2 days off in Feb. Since my oldest son moved back home I get to see my grand daughter lots (silver lining), we have her Tue/ Thurs evenings and every weekend. Soccer is finally over until summer, maybe I may get to write again, lol. Take care

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/29/2014 3:06:00 PM

It is great to see you happily in love, you deserve to be fullfilled. Happy New Year!

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/2/2015 3:18:00 PM

Thanks Richard

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/28/2014 12:30:00 PM

cecillia very beautifully painted picture i pray you had a good christmas wishing you a happy new year

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/29/2014 10:23:00 AM

Thank you Liam

Paul Callus

Date: 12/27/2014 6:15:00 AM

He must be the ideal genii, Cecilia! He's got you under his spell and he works magic!! Keep this beautiful love afloat! All the best for the new year. // paul

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/29/2014 10:23:00 AM

That you Paul

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/27/2014 4:51:00 AM

Delightfully cheerful! It made me smile! I am certain he is a wonderful man for he treats you with so much love and affection! May forever happy you both be! A seven, my dear Cecilia!

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/29/2014 10:24:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/26/2014 11:41:00 PM

Makes me wish I was "him" so beautiful!!!

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/29/2014 10:24:00 AM

Thank you Arthur

Kelly Deschler

Date: 12/26/2014 8:11:00 PM

I liked your creative and romantic version of the classic Christmas song. A very nice poem, Cecilia!... I hope you had a great Christmas and I wish you all the best for the New Year!

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/29/2014 10:24:00 AM

Thank you Kelly

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/26/2014 9:34:00 AM

Reads like a miracle worker. Way to go with picking a mate or is he your father. Thanks for stopping by. May your New Year be the best one up to this point in your life and may each year that follows only be better. Sara Kendrick

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/29/2014 10:22:00 AM

Thank you Sara, he is my mate

Eve Roper

Date: 12/26/2014 8:44:00 AM

7 Dear Cecilia, nice poem, it is nice to have a love of peace instead of drama, Happy New Year and may all your wishes and dreams come true

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/26/2014 8:55:00 AM

Thank you Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/26/2014 5:42:00 AM

- Dear Cecilia, a beautiful poem !!! - Merry Christmas and a Happy New year 2015 !!! - // Anne-Lise :)

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/26/2014 8:56:00 AM

Thank you Anne Lise

Len Gasun

Date: 12/26/2014 1:42:00 AM

So nice to read from you again my dear friend Cecilia. Thank you so much for this very wonderful poem. Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones! love lots, Leonora

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/26/2014 8:57:00 AM

Thank you Leonora

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2014 1:13:00 AM

He Is THE PERFEcT Santa, and I bet you kissed him under the mistletoe!!! So cute.

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/26/2014 8:59:00 AM

thank you Andrea. I ikss him everywhere, tee hee

Joseph May

Date: 12/25/2014 10:39:00 PM

Hi Cecilia...A beautiful write ....Happy Christmas and all the best for the New Year...hugs

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/25/2014 11:02:00 PM

Thank you Joe

Jan Allison

Date: 12/25/2014 6:37:00 PM

aww I was singing this to Santa Claus is coming to town - love the clever write and the repeated stanzas ... he sounds absolute wonderful Cecilia! Hugs Jan xx A 7 from me

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/25/2014 8:05:00 PM

Thanks Jan....Merry Christmas!