I'M Telling You Why

At him I'll never shout
Never make him cry
In him I never doubt
I'm telling you why......

He cuddles me when I'm sleeping
He makes me smile when I'm awake
He senses when I'm upset or sad
He loves me for goodness sake

At him I'll never shout
Never make him cry
In him I never doubt
I'm telling you why.....

He cooks all my favorite dishes
He loves all my quirky ways
He tells me I am beautiful
He sets my heart ablaze

At him I'll never shout
Never make him cry
In him I never doubt
I'm telling you why.....

He makes me feel very special
He makes me laugh out loud
He will be there for me always
His feelings he'll never enshroud

At him I'll never shout
Never make him cry
In him I never doubt
I'm telling you why.....

I will love him forever
I will never let him go
I will treasure every moment
Together we'll keep our love aglow

12/25/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gasun Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 9:49 AM
This is an awesome and delightful poem to read my dear friend, Cecilia. It's like a song. I love it and enjoyed so much. Thanks a lot for sharing! thanks a lot as well for your precious time reading one of my latest poems. More blessings to you! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
Macfarlane Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 3:28 PM
Thanks Leonara, glad you enjoyed. Hugs
Horsman Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 4:38 PM
Wow this is beautiful poetry, love the sincerity...glad i came by and read this..
Macfarlane Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 3:24 PM
Thanks Harry, glad you liked. : )
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 6:39 PM
Hi, Sweetie, thanks for seeing my poem today.How are you doing?
Macfarlane Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 3:24 PM
Thanks Andrea, still as busy as ever, had only 2 days off in Feb. Since my oldest son moved back home I get to see my grand daughter lots (silver lining), we have her Tue/ Thurs evenings and every weekend. Soccer is finally over until summer, maybe I may get to write again, lol. Take care
Lamoureux Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 3:06 PM
It is great to see you happily in love, you deserve to be fullfilled. Happy New Year!
Macfarlane Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 3:18 PM
Thanks Richard
Mcdaid Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 12:30 PM
cecillia very beautifully painted picture i pray you had a good christmas wishing you a happy new year
Macfarlane Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 10:23 AM
Thank you Liam
Callus Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 6:15 AM
He must be the ideal genii, Cecilia! He's got you under his spell and he works magic!! Keep this beautiful love afloat! All the best for the new year. // paul
Macfarlane Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 10:23 AM
That you Paul
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December 27, 2014 at 4:51 AM
Delightfully cheerful! It made me smile! I am certain he is a wonderful man for he treats you with so much love and affection! May forever happy you both be! A seven, my dear Cecilia!
Macfarlane Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 10:24 AM
Thank you Demetrios
Vaso Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 11:41 PM
Makes me wish I was "him" so beautiful!!!
Macfarlane Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 10:24 AM
Thank you Arthur
Deschler Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 8:11 PM
I liked your creative and romantic version of the classic Christmas song. A very nice poem, Cecilia!... I hope you had a great Christmas and I wish you all the best for the New Year!
Macfarlane Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 10:24 AM
Thank you Kelly
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December 26, 2014 at 9:34 AM
Reads like a miracle worker. Way to go with picking a mate or is he your father. Thanks for stopping by. May your New Year be the best one up to this point in your life and may each year that follows only be better. Sara Kendrick
Macfarlane Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 10:22 AM
Thank you Sara, he is my mate
Roper Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 8:44 AM
7 Dear Cecilia, nice poem, it is nice to have a love of peace instead of drama, Happy New Year and may all your wishes and dreams come true
Macfarlane Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 8:55 AM
Thank you Eve
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December 26, 2014 at 5:42 AM
- Dear Cecilia, a beautiful poem !!! - Merry Christmas and a Happy New year 2015 !!! - // Anne-Lise :)
Macfarlane Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 8:56 AM
Thank you Anne Lise
Gasun Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 1:42 AM
So nice to read from you again my dear friend Cecilia. Thank you so much for this very wonderful poem. Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones! love lots, Leonora
Macfarlane Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 8:57 AM
Thank you Leonora
Dietrich Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 1:13 AM
He Is THE PERFEcT Santa, and I bet you kissed him under the mistletoe!!! So cute.
Macfarlane Avatar
December 26, 2014 at 8:59 AM
thank you Andrea. I ikss him everywhere, tee hee
May Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 10:39 PM
Hi Cecilia...A beautiful write ....Happy Christmas and all the best for the New Year...hugs
Macfarlane Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 11:02 PM
Thank you Joe
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 6:37 PM
aww I was singing this to Santa Claus is coming to town - love the clever write and the repeated stanzas ... he sounds absolute wonderful Cecilia! Hugs Jan xx A 7 from me
Macfarlane Avatar
December 25, 2014 at 8:05 PM
Thanks Jan....Merry Christmas!
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