I'M Strong

Please!do not laugh at me
walking alone
She is there but me.
I stand alone
Please! do not think me as left
I'm walking to be strong
To know how to walk lonely!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Garg Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 11:12 AM
Its a very small but a very strong n complete poem...wow.
Michelle Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 8:07 PM
Very deep, I agree. Lovely Love, Juli-Michelle
Dey Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 3:08 AM
Thanks juli for your nice visit to my work
Davis Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 11:08 PM
words so deep and powerful. the reader can feel your sorry and strength. nice job
Dey Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 11:29 PM
Thank you robin for you sweet comment
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August 11, 2013 at 12:59 PM
amazing how you share your strength through words... a mighty poem... Linda
Dey Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 9:33 PM
Dear Linda,i'm happy to have you as my friend and comments from you.This will somehow inspire me for better
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