I'M Strong

Please!do not laugh at me walking alone She is there but me. I stand alone Please! do not think me as left I'm walking to be strong To know how to walk lonely!

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Archana Garg

Date: 1/11/2014 11:12:00 AM

Its a very small but a very strong n complete poem...wow.

Juli- Michelle

Date: 10/6/2013 8:07:00 PM

Very deep, I agree. Lovely Love, Juli-Michelle

Litan Dey
Date: 10/7/2013 3:08:00 AM

Thanks juli for your nice visit to my work

Robin Davis

Date: 9/21/2013 11:08:00 PM

words so deep and powerful. the reader can feel your sorry and strength. nice job

Litan Dey
Date: 9/21/2013 11:29:00 PM

Thank you robin for you sweet comment

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/11/2013 12:59:00 PM

amazing how you share your strength through words... a mighty poem... Linda

Litan Dey
Date: 8/11/2013 9:33:00 PM

Dear Linda,i'm happy to have you as my friend and comments from you.This will somehow inspire me for better