I'M Still Hopelessly In Love With You

Far
So far away 
Whenever I need you
You’re not around

I think of you
Dreaming we would find a way 
To get back together again
And that you would stay

I love
Everything about you, if you didn’t know
I love the way you hold me close
I love the way you whisper to my ear

There’s nothing I won’t say or do
To have you, back into my arms
Loving me the way 
The way only you can do

I love 
Love to dance with you
I love to feel
Your heart beat next to mine

As we move across the floor
The music takes us away
And we’re hopelessly in love 

The way I pray we'd stay

If you were only here
but you're so far away 
I'm still hopelessly, in love with you

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Date: 8/26/2023 3:48:00 PM
Hello Michael Arturo, This is so romantic. I enjoyed the read. I am making this poem my fav. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\
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Date: 11/26/2020 5:56:00 AM
Arturo: This is very touching, very heartfelt. I enjoyed every line. Thank you for composing it and sharing it. Paul
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/26/2020 8:28:00 AM
The love poems from the heart...lives...Thanks, Paul...All the best to you and yours...
Date: 11/17/2020 5:35:00 PM
A beautiful love poem, Arturo :)
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Arturo Michael
Date: 11/18/2020 10:06:00 AM
A true one...Thanks Angela
Date: 9/4/2020 1:03:00 AM
Lovely, catchy muse this, Arturo...flows effortlessly just like the dancing. Enjoyed! My best regards -- cheers! :) john
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Arturo Michael
Date: 9/5/2020 6:45:00 AM
Thanks John...
Date: 8/12/2020 10:06:00 AM
Hello Michael Arturo, Could you please let me know the name of the youtube file? Thank you.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 9/5/2020 6:30:00 AM
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCU0JaFx76f7p6YeADgA_ukw
Date: 8/12/2020 5:18:00 AM
Hello Michael, Arturo, this very romantic. I feel the love for the person in this poem. Romance blooms near or far away. I am making this my fav. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 9/5/2020 6:45:00 AM
I sent you the info...All the best Darlene
Date: 6/26/2020 10:27:00 PM
Heartfelt love shown here my friend. I hope you are well if it is a true experience...
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/27/2020 10:40:00 AM
I've survived...16 years after the fact...only goes to show true loves never dies...Thanks Michael
Date: 6/20/2020 6:04:00 PM
Arturo, your romantic heart beats with passion and your blood pulses with longing - your potent pen flows with vulnerability, mon ami. Such emotion expressed so beautifully is swoon worthy. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/20/2020 7:08:00 PM
This is the real thing Susan...it's still happening inside of me now...no matter how the years roll by...love loves regardless...I'm glad it came out to be seen...Thank you for saying...All the best always my dear friend...
Date: 6/9/2020 3:38:00 AM
A true romantic that I am, I believe in love. I think she'll hear you one of these days and hurry back. A truly romantic piece Arturo, I love it and a fave....Maria Hugs
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/9/2020 2:43:00 PM
Thank you Maria...I'm a lover too...every now and then I get a message to write something inspirational...but If I focus on love...I won't stop writing... All the best
Date: 6/9/2020 3:25:00 AM
you write romance so well Arturo I struggle with this type of poem , a beautiful piece:-) hugs Jan xx
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/9/2020 2:39:00 PM
All I have to do is put it in the format...about love and romance I've explored it well...and to this day I'm still paying dearly for some of the lessons... Thanks Jan...All the best
Date: 6/4/2020 1:53:00 PM
from the title it sings a truly loving piece beautifully painted wishing you a blessed week arthuro
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Date: 6/3/2020 8:57:00 AM
My belated Congrats!! Arturo...on this beautiful piece...poetic love brother...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 6/2/2020 1:29:00 PM
Now that's hopeless, my friend. Good work Arturo...
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Date: 6/2/2020 12:02:00 PM
This is overloaded with emotion!!! Beautifully crafted!!
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Date: 6/2/2020 8:36:00 AM
A wonderfully romantic and longing piece. Expressing that longing and heartache when loves are far apart. A fav my friend. God bless..
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/2/2020 9:54:00 AM
Yes, it escaped me...and ever since I'm lost...otherwise I won't be writing poetry, I'll be making Poetry...Thanks Robert
Date: 6/2/2020 5:12:00 AM
Olivia Newton John would be jeolous (lol) Very emotional write, Arturo. Superb!
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/2/2020 9:50:00 AM
I wish it was for Olivia...She was beautiful...haven't seen her of late though...Thank you Charles...
Date: 6/2/2020 1:28:00 AM
Oh to have someone feel that way. Vulnerable, and honest emotion. Nice to know such love exists. Well written
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/2/2020 9:51:00 AM
Yes, it does...My heart can't deny it...Thanks Sheri
Date: 6/1/2020 7:27:00 PM
a very romantic one, Arturo. To make a special someone swoon!
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/2/2020 9:52:00 AM
Designed to swoon...A desperate man will try anything...Thanks Andrea
Date: 6/1/2020 1:59:00 AM
The power of your sentiment break through the poetic wonderment, when words so enchanting, so graceful cannot hide.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/1/2020 4:45:00 AM
Correct...when you want something it's good to be clear... no time to waste...Thanks Harry...Keep good my friend
Date: 5/31/2020 9:54:00 AM
Beautiful words which project a mixture of emotions; love and longing take centre stage. ~ Regards // paul
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/1/2020 4:42:00 AM
Feelings that I hold dearly...Thanks Paul...
Date: 5/31/2020 8:20:00 AM
Well expressed Arturo. A beautiful poem :)
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Date: 6/1/2020 4:41:00 AM
Thanks Heidi
Date: 5/31/2020 8:17:00 AM
So descriptive of loss and longing, Arturo. Janice
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/1/2020 4:41:00 AM
When a man's heart is aching for love it will be very clear...Thanks Janice...All the best
Date: 5/31/2020 5:50:00 AM
beautiful. courageous. honest.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 6/1/2020 4:36:00 AM
Bonjour Lady Labyrinth... totally correct when you say courage... I even laugh at myself in amazement...in the face of nothing I still believe...
Date: 5/29/2020 5:12:00 PM
Love sometimes can last a lifetime. When it is one sided it can feel like an inferno. Well delivered dear Arturo. I hope its fiction xo
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Arturo Michael
Date: 5/29/2020 6:11:00 PM
There's no way I can write unless it's coming from the heart...that's the one lesson I've learned in writing poetry...before I could think it...now, must feel it... Thanks my friend...
Date: 5/28/2020 6:07:00 PM
I loved reading your poem with the music, Arturo...very lovely and romantic! xx Rhonda
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Arturo Michael
Date: 5/28/2020 6:32:00 PM
I'm always trying something different...will experiment with voice styles in the future...it's easier to write with mind and body, talk and write...then ink is spirit
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