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I'M Still Here

I'm still here,
Though I think that I,
May be fading fast,
You know you've never known me,
And I cry,
When I see that I've a past.
Somehow I know,
That if I could go,
And redeem myself,
I'd sleep in my own head at last.

When did this girl appear?
In the mirror,
wracked with fear,
When will this reflection be
Someone who looks like me?

It's cold outside,
But I love the ice,
Because it warms my soul
And takes me to my childhood.
Throwing dice
And watching as they roll.
Inside my head,
I still feel the dread,
But I let it go
Burying this wretched hole,

When did this girl appear,
In the mirror,
Scratched but clear:
Tears in eyes and scars, she says
that, "I don't Know."
Sometime I hope she'll be, 
Back in me,
Honestly,
One day this mirror will show,
Someone that I know.

PARODY OF REFLECTION; MULAN @Dec2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Lane Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 11:23 PM
I'm glad I found your poetry page! This is a beautiful piece. I love the last two lines. Nice write
Lamoureux Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 11:11 PM
exceptional piece. I have enjoyed reading your work. Goodnight.
Kearley Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 2:08 AM
Very Nice! Such feelings in it....Wow!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 11:12 PM
Hi Dan I like the new cool dude photo!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 11:42 AM
I like this one too xx
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