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I hope you remember all of the bad things you have done so far I hope you still have the chance to fix them Im sorry it took me forever to write this letter to you Ive been meaning to save you from what your about to become For some reason i cant get a grip on it I dont know what i want to say I dont know how to help you Im about to tell you about some of the things you are about to do Right now your 16 Right now you are sitting on your bed listening to music Reading a book on your favorite band Smoking that cigarette That will soon get you into all the other things that causes more problems for you Try to avoid the guy you are about to let into your life Remember that your not allowed to talk to strangers Remember your mom told you that when you were 7 Its about time you listen to her You will meet a girl And you will end up hurting her Dont take her to that club Where your band is about to play Your not good at singing And your bass playing still needs some work Dont embarass yourself It lowers your self esteem And you will try to committ suicide Multiple times But dont worry It doesnt work So stop trying to Kill yourself Remember the night when you ran away And went to go live with your aunt Yea... Shes about to kick you out Look under your bed You will find 500 dollars You put it there when you were young You forgot Thats why im writing you Remember it Take it and use it wisely Dont use it on the drugs Dont use it on the beer Use it towards a better future So then i dont have to write this letter again. 12-13-12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/11/2015 8:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Orlin! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/7/2015 3:05:00 PM
orlin, A lovely win, Love **SKAT**
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Date: 7/7/2015 2:12:00 PM
:) Congrats on your win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/7/2015 8:28:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again. I hope you listened to yourself.
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Date: 7/7/2015 4:03:00 AM
Lovely write Orlin! Congrats on ur win!
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Date: 1/8/2013 4:26:00 PM
Kurt, your poem rocks...., Congratulations with your winning poem in David's awesome contest.. pd
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Date: 1/6/2013 5:40:00 PM
Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 1/5/2013 4:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your grand win!! Good day! :)
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Date: 1/1/2013 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations! Wishing you a Happy New Year!
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Date: 1/1/2013 7:40:00 AM
My hearty congratulations on your super win and great write my dear Kurt! Happy New Year, too! hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/31/2012 5:36:00 PM
Good one, well expressed, Congrats and Happy New Year!
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Date: 12/31/2012 4:28:00 PM
Kurt congrats on your win ,I loved this one, thanks for entering...David
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Date: 12/31/2012 2:15:00 PM
Big congrats Kurt, and all the best for the new year xx
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