I'M So In Love With Him

I'm so in love with him, he doesn't even know the butterflies in my stomach grow and grow. He doesn't understand the way I feel. I can't go on pretending that it's not a big deal. Why can't he see? Why can't he start chasing me? I want him to understand, I really do. How do you think I can get the message through?

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Amanda Mae Hammons

Date: 1/13/2009 8:12:00 AM

thts rlly cute and its true i even hope tht some guys can see the girls if the like them i understand

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 1/8/2009 1:07:00 PM

great write, suppose he feels the same way for you but is too shy. you should talk to him.....Maryam

Sandy Schermerhorn

Date: 1/8/2009 12:50:00 PM

Sometimes it has to be spelled out in giant letters and neon lights for guys to really get it lol and you never know who's to say maybe he feels for you the same way perhaps you should give it a try better to live life with no regrets then to be there sometime later left to wonder why good luck great write again look forward to reading more