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I'M Pulled To You

Through whispers in my nighttime sky your attraction caresses in such stunning passionate glow longing a soul to impress With every gaze I embrace I'm pulled to you ever closer a heavenly scent wafting ever true In glorious pools of you I wade if only momentarily never wishing to miss a thing even temporarily Upon a solitary lunar breeze affections are cast above heartbeats play along in tune to our special kind of love Oh moon my gorgeous moon I so graciously swoon

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Becca Teagan

Date: 11/15/2016 9:29:00 AM

This is so lovely and romantic, Tim... very beautifully written.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/14/2016 4:15:00 PM

A full and beautiful poem, once in a lifetime words!

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/14/2016 3:45:00 PM

Have you ever wondered why the moon is so romantic? How many dreams have been spawned by the moon? Really a lovely write, Tim:)

Chris Green

Date: 11/14/2016 1:13:00 PM

Like many below, the moon is an inspiration to me and the one we are hopefully about to see tonight should be spectacular. Your poem brings that feeling Tim, it does pull the reader in. Really nicely done.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/14/2016 1:11:00 PM

- Oh, this is heavenly beautiful - I love your romantic poems, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/14/2016 12:55:00 PM

I so love the moon...I think a bit more than the sun...Somehow light shines brighter in the dark indeed.Such a romantic metaphorical poem indeed ..Gonna fave this.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/14/2016 12:52:00 PM

Yes, the moon is gorgeous and she will continue to inspire and enchant us just as she always has... This is a really lovely poem, Tim. I enjoyed it very much!