I'M Pulled To You

Through whispers in my nighttime sky
your attraction caresses 
in such stunning passionate glow 
longing a soul to impress

With every gaze I embrace
I'm pulled to you
ever closer a heavenly scent
wafting ever true

In glorious pools of you I wade
if only momentarily
never wishing to miss a thing
even temporarily 

Upon a solitary lunar breeze 
affections are cast above
heartbeats play along in tune
to our special kind of love

Oh moon my gorgeous moon
I so graciously swoon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/15/2016 9:29:00 AM
This is so lovely and romantic, Tim... very beautifully written.
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Date: 11/14/2016 4:15:00 PM
A full and beautiful poem, once in a lifetime words!
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Date: 11/14/2016 3:45:00 PM
Have you ever wondered why the moon is so romantic? How many dreams have been spawned by the moon? Really a lovely write, Tim:)
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Date: 11/14/2016 1:13:00 PM
Like many below, the moon is an inspiration to me and the one we are hopefully about to see tonight should be spectacular. Your poem brings that feeling Tim, it does pull the reader in. Really nicely done.
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Date: 11/14/2016 1:11:00 PM
- Oh, this is heavenly beautiful - I love your romantic poems, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/14/2016 12:55:00 PM
I so love the moon...I think a bit more than the sun...Somehow light shines brighter in the dark indeed.Such a romantic metaphorical poem indeed ..Gonna fave this.
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Date: 11/14/2016 12:52:00 PM
Yes, the moon is gorgeous and she will continue to inspire and enchant us just as she always has... This is a really lovely poem, Tim. I enjoyed it very much!
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