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I'm Only Dreaming

In the midst of hubbub, at the verge of one hectic June,
I see myriad diamond stars, and ruby sun under the moon,
As viewed from a planet of jade green with sapphire blue,
Covered by pearly clouds, vanishing in moon's silver hue!

But I am only dreaming, for it is the middle of the day,
And from sunshine I have wandered, into night's doorway,
And the golden sun has set behind the scenes in my mind,
Only to reemerge as I wake, leaving night's riches behind!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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December 17, 2020 at 10:00 AM
Hi Evelyn, That's such a lovely and vivid dream. Your chosen words makes the dream come alive on the page. Well done. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 10:12 AM
I'm glad you liked my dream, Alexis. Thank you for the thrilling remarks. Blessings and joy. :=)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 5:49 AM
I feel your Positivity in this poem! Always lovely imagery!
Buehler Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 9:26 AM
How nice! Thank you very much. :=)
Buhagiar Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 1:27 AM
Your dreams are very colorful. Beauty abounds. An excellent cameo of a poem. ~~
Buehler Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 9:25 AM
As always, your words conjure smiles. Thank you. :)
Wolf Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 5:34 PM
Your dreams are so vivid, Evelyn. They are so much richer than dull, ordinary life! Magic Moments, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 8:14 PM
Yes indeed. That's why I'm always daydreaming. I can't get enough! Thank you for the nice comment. Day Tripper, Evelyn
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