I'm Only Dreaming

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In the midst of hubbub, at the verge of one hectic June, I see myriad diamond stars, and ruby sun under the moon, As viewed from a planet of jade green with sapphire blue, Covered by pearly clouds, vanishing in moon's silver hue! But I am only dreaming, for it is the middle of the day, And from sunshine I have wandered, into night's doorway, And the golden sun has set behind the scenes in my mind, Only to reemerge as I wake, leaving night's riches behind!

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Alexis Y.

Date: 12/17/2020 10:00:00 AM

Hi Evelyn, That's such a lovely and vivid dream. Your chosen words makes the dream come alive on the page. Well done. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/17/2020 10:12:00 AM

I'm glad you liked my dream, Alexis. Thank you for the thrilling remarks. Blessings and joy. :=)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/16/2020 5:49:00 AM

I feel your Positivity in this poem! Always lovely imagery!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/16/2020 9:26:00 AM

How nice! Thank you very much. :=)

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 12/16/2020 1:27:00 AM

Your dreams are very colorful. Beauty abounds. An excellent cameo of a poem. ~~

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/16/2020 9:25:00 AM

As always, your words conjure smiles. Thank you. :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/15/2020 5:34:00 PM

Your dreams are so vivid, Evelyn. They are so much richer than dull, ordinary life! Magic Moments, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/15/2020 8:14:00 PM

Yes indeed. That's why I'm always daydreaming. I can't get enough! Thank you for the nice comment. Day Tripper, Evelyn