I'M Not Worth Love

I'm not a strong man as you can see
so why says she she's in love with me?
nor handsome nor have i any outward appeals
so why keeps she saying something for me she feels?

I'm an angry, outraged, tempered man
so what makes her do for me all that she can?
though yet a coward, weak in character, and not brave
so why says she that me in her heart will always save?

I'm a socially awkward man, a loner, with no friends
so what makes her say she'll love me till the world ends?
I'm full of flaws, some i know of, but many more there can be
so why keeps she saying that she still loves me?

But I think, as I'm on all accounts, not worth affection
Then what she keeps saying is but a cheap deception!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/24/2017 8:02:00 AM
A really beautiful write, you re lucky man if that girl exists in your life, she s totally sincair to you because she doesn t want anybody beautiful or handsome, she want you, she loves you, may God helps everyone finding a partner like this, believe me, she s the one for you, well I don t know if your description is true or not, but it does describe me, I m not social, I don t have any friends, I like my loneliness and I don t think that I m handsome or attractive
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