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I'M Not Ready To Get Off

Like train cars speeding
along, years come and go. I'm
relishing the ride.


September 3, 2018, entered in Brian Strand's Early September 
Standard Contest

Copyright © Janice Canerdy | Year Posted 2017

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Andrea Dietrich

January 4, 2017 at 3:28 PM

I love this, Janice.What a simple but unique and clever way to do the challenge.

January 4, 2017 at 4:11 PM

This little poem was inspired by thoughts of my sixty-fifth bday--in just days! Thanks so much for your kind words, Andrea! Janice

January 2, 2017 at 10:18 PM

You must be riding first class:) Pretty bumpy ride back here in coach:(

January 2, 2017 at 11:53 PM

I'm in coach too. Hey! I think I see you a few seats ahead. Thanks for your comment, Daniel! Janice

January 2, 2017 at 9:32 PM

:-) Me neither. But I've sure got a lot more rattles in my drive train! Speed on:-) ~ john

January 2, 2017 at 9:38 PM

Thanks, John. My engine makes funny sounds sometimes, but I'm not sure a tune up would make much difference! LOL Janice

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