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I'M Not Ready To Get Off

Like train cars speeding along, years come and go. I'm relishing the ride. September 3, 2018, entered in Brian Strand's Early September Standard Contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2017 3:28:00 PM

I love this, Janice.What a simple but unique and clever way to do the challenge.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/4/2017 4:11:00 PM

This little poem was inspired by thoughts of my sixty-fifth bday--in just days! Thanks so much for your kind words, Andrea! Janice

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/2/2017 10:18:00 PM

You must be riding first class:) Pretty bumpy ride back here in coach:(

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/2/2017 11:53:00 PM

I'm in coach too. Hey! I think I see you a few seats ahead. Thanks for your comment, Daniel! Janice

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 1/2/2017 9:32:00 PM

:-) Me neither. But I've sure got a lot more rattles in my drive train! Speed on:-) ~ john

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/2/2017 9:38:00 PM

Thanks, John. My engine makes funny sounds sometimes, but I'm not sure a tune up would make much difference! LOL Janice