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I'M Not Insane

skipping rocks across the lake feeling tears run down my face screaming out i feel the pain and i know that im not sane feeling arms encircle me i kick and writh just to get free seeing things i shouldnt see things are locked inside of me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/6/2012 6:57:00 PM
Kaley, this is a deep and complex poem in so few words. The "mismatch" of situation and reaction (freedom and joy of skipping stones & feeling sad and being comforted and trying to break free) are insightful and speak to the conflict of what we have and what we want. Great writing. Stephen.
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Date: 12/16/2011 1:21:00 PM
This is awesome. Thank you for unlocking this series of words in your heart and sharing with the world. Excellent! Always, Laura
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