Billy Thekidster Poet Rhyme

I'M Not Good With Good Bye

I'm not good with good bye. I never have been.
Not being good with good bye, is most probably one of my greater sins,
and yet we all live in a good bye world when you get down to the bottom of it.
Life goes on and life becomes gone never again to be a part of it,
except perhaps in some long and lasting loving memory,
but I'm sorry to say, that just isn't good enough for me.
Those loving memories will also die eventually,
when those loved ones who carried the memory of they become deceased also inevitably.
I'm not good with good bye and I probably never ever will be.
No, I'm not any good at all with good bye, as all of you can now plainly see.

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix December 12, 2009 at 6:42 PM Heartfelt write here, and well written, but I beg to differ. Life never ends, it's just a different plane, like think of a caterpilar that becomes a butterfly. And loved ones? we will meet them again, someday. Just simply because love is eternal. Thanks for sharing and thank you for the tip, it did help. Thank you very much. Best wishes to you too, Caroline.

Anthony Nutter December 12, 2009 at 4:31 PM Sounds pretty good to me. An insightful and imaginative write very well done. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit