Im Not Done Yet

I've been in this world 
for 19 years. I've shed 
more than a hundred 
tears. Everyday I have 
a personality of mad 
glad or sad. I only 
seek wisdom and 
knowledge in my head. 
I'm a young man on  
never ending missions. 
I have to make great 
decsisions. I was born 
without a father I'm 
still setting my goals 
and acomplishing them 
like a brand new car 
starter. I have walked 
and rode on many 
streets rather it's car 
bike or my very own 
two feet. I have been 
tought by many 
teachers. I have been 
introduce to God by 
many preachers. I 
have made many 
friends that have no 
problem lending me a 
hand. I have made 
many haters that 
motivates me to do 
even greater. I've 
done my absolute best 
and no I'm not done 
yet.

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Date: 1/20/2012 1:47:00 PM
Congrats and I like this. My roots are in Spoken word and i see you have that lyrical mindset.
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Ivan Walton Jr.
Date: 1/24/2012 10:30:00 PM
thank and i appreciate you
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Date: 1/24/2012 10:27:00 PM
thanks i appreciate it
Date: 1/18/2012 3:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 1/17/2012 6:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Ivan. Love, Carol P.S. you can find the featured poets down the center of PoetrySoup Homepage. There are 4 pages of them this week and you can click and read and leave comments to the other poets. The poems are changed around each day giving your poem more exposure. The poems are up from Sunday to the next Sunday
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Date: 1/17/2012 9:17:00 PM
sorry im getting to you late thank you and i appreciate you
Date: 1/16/2012 2:01:00 PM
Ivan....CONGRATULATIONS on the week`s winner!! :) - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/17/2012 9:20:00 PM
Im sorry Im getting to you late thank you and I appreciate you
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