I'M Lost Without You

Sixteen years that we're together has now ended when you went away.
                 I always ask myself where we went wrong?
                      Or was it me who's just holding on.
                    I need to understand, I want to know.
                       Tell me how to live without you.
                                 How can I go on?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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October 3, 2021 at 6:03 AM
I must say my former comment isn't even a comment only a question. This poem is powerful but in the process of becoming powerful it almost makes you powerless. I know some of that is you going through the situation. I hope you find your answers. I really hope you find them in yourself, but either way I wish you the best on a tough journey if this is all still valid.
Bunch Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 5:05 AM
Are you still writing?
Torres Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 3:11 PM
Hi Wayland! Thanks for a kind visit. I haven't had much time to write lately.
Byrne Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 1:42 AM
Aiyah, I feel your pain, Frances
Jordan Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 10:26 PM
Aiyah, i’ve Lived long enough to know that life has its many up and downs, but if we just hold on and keep the faith, it’s Going to be alright. Hold on to Gods love
Roper Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 12:10 PM
Aiyah, your lyric is so heartfelt.. Life goes on with one step at a time and maybe a new change with new friends.. It does take time to stop hurting...
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