I'M Lost Without You

Sixteen years that we're together has now ended when you went away.
                 I always ask myself where we went wrong?
                      Or was it me who's just holding on.
                    I need to understand, I want to know.
                       Tell me how to live without you.
                                 How can I go on?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 10/3/2021 6:03:00 AM
I must say my former comment isn't even a comment only a question. This poem is powerful but in the process of becoming powerful it almost makes you powerless. I know some of that is you going through the situation. I hope you find your answers. I really hope you find them in yourself, but either way I wish you the best on a tough journey if this is all still valid.
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Date: 10/20/2019 5:05:00 AM
Are you still writing?
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 10/22/2019 3:11:00 PM
Hi Wayland! Thanks for a kind visit. I haven't had much time to write lately.
Date: 8/4/2019 1:42:00 AM
Aiyah, I feel your pain, Frances
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Date: 2/25/2019 10:26:00 PM
Aiyah, i’ve Lived long enough to know that life has its many up and downs, but if we just hold on and keep the faith, it’s Going to be alright. Hold on to Gods love
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Date: 5/15/2018 2:36:00 PM
I have lived through pain of a loss also. Sometimes we can't understand and some explanations aren't acceptable. You will go on, the strength will come. Be gentle with yourself. Your words are soft, and wistful, it touched me. Take care
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Date: 5/15/2018 12:10:00 PM
Aiyah, your lyric is so heartfelt.. Life goes on with one step at a time and maybe a new change with new friends.. It does take time to stop hurting...
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