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I'M Lost Now

Vision a nightmare picture a circle of death, Escalating the fight for life and suppression of breath, Praying into the wind to save all that is left, Ever wonder if she can here you and if so will he help, Questioning God because Allah allows so much pain, And Buddha teaches me much except dodging the rain, Or can I really be that blind taking the fight to my brother, Blood for blood right mama After I tell her I love her, Then I turn my back to the world

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Date: 8/20/2010 4:35:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Dallas. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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