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Poetic Form: Rhyme
Inspired: 2024 May 25
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KEY: N-Neighbor "An armless heart steals the pause that a calming reveals," ... by The Poet
He said his peace then looked at his timepiece like he's forgotten supine the sullen skies that spat in his eyes and smiles with caution while's till a bus comes counts his coins if funds costs ride enough who's minding Harry hairy-a bit much Wheaton Terrier if off the cuff jointly waiting sits coolly so natural well school he was poor little fella Spring fair cause of tales and dreams whip full sails winds of summer ride home be no difference thoughts well in silence right for a poem of love a life of good deeds still faithful without needs proud to know him the longest ride home short for a good mind to roam if nothing else N: You're out just a bit." "Harry!" ["He chose you to sit, best of my pals! |^| |^| I'm ..."]->/BACK TO TITLE/ (reads note)

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Date: 5/26/2024 11:26:00 AM
Hilo Sotto Poet, a long ride home is good for thinking things out. Enjoyed this poem. Aloha! /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/26/2024 2:53:00 PM
Aloha Hilo Poet, I am glad it turned out to be an enjoyable bus ride home Hilo My friend. enjoy your evening. /Darlene/
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/26/2024 12:56:00 PM
An enjoyable bus ride home it turned out to be, Aloha Darlene from/Hilo, Hawaii, William

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