Im Just Fine.

I have no feelings , no thoughts and no remorse,
Deathly evil lurks around my mind,
I know no humor, i am the maggot on a corpse.
maybe its time for me to unwind.

I hate mostly everyone, except one,
But your most likely included,
Mind on the burner, death from a gun.
My hate turns to sorrow, diluted.

Ill seduce you and take your soul,
And feed from your blood so easily,
ill love you and make you whole.
Or kill you just as feasibly.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 3:14 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 2:17 PM
Nice to see this one again, Monte...Linda
A  Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 10:29 PM
Monte, I enjoyed reading your poem today. Take Care. **SKAT**
Cummings Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 5:30 PM
Your mind amuses me
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May 23, 2010 at 3:10 PM
strong write, nice one, very cool last stanza
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