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Im Just Fine.

I have no feelings , no thoughts and no remorse, Deathly evil lurks around my mind, I know no humor, i am the maggot on a corpse. maybe its time for me to unwind. I hate mostly everyone, except one, But your most likely included, Mind on the burner, death from a gun. My hate turns to sorrow, diluted. Ill seduce you and take your soul, And feed from your blood so easily, ill love you and make you whole. Or kill you just as feasibly.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/25/2016 2:17:00 PM
Nice to see this one again, Monte...Linda
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Date: 7/28/2015 10:29:00 PM
Monte, I enjoyed reading your poem today. Take Care. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/30/2014 5:30:00 PM
Your mind amuses me
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Date: 5/23/2010 3:10:00 PM
strong write, nice one, very cool last stanza
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