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I'M In Love


I am in love.  I’m pretty sure now.
I keep getting lost in the labyrinths of my mind,
thinking about you, wondering how to connect with you
again.  I stop working at times, trying hard not to 
fall for you even more every single day.
But I know I’m a gone case, 
totally bowled over
by you.

Our relationship defies all norms,
I hear you around me all the time, looking deeper
into your meaning of this new feeling I’ve got.  I stop in
my tracks when I read something that reminds me
of our inseparable bond.  No one can tear
us apart.  Not now, not ever.
 We are born to be 
together.

Yes, I’m totally in love with you.
It’s a wonderful thing,
this love, it has
changed me.
Our kinship
will bloom and
evolve into something
beautiful, I got a gut feeling about us. 

Let me introduce you to my friends 
so that they too may
fall in love 
with you.

Yes, I’m in love… 
…with words.



06.26.2021



For Charles Messina's "Surprise me" contest

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Mahtab Bangalee

July 7, 2021 at 1:42 AM

love is a celestial born feeling in the human heart~ superb and expressive poem penned

Sam Kauffman

July 6, 2021 at 2:10 PM

Wonderfully written from a very talented wordsmith Jo! Thanks for the introduction! Congratulations in a few words - congrats, kudos, high fives, three cheers, hats off, hip hip hooray, take a bow for rave reviews! (And blessings!)

Anisha Dutta

July 5, 2021 at 9:41 PM

So nice to read. Really I enjoyed. CONGRATS Jo.

Beata Agustin

July 5, 2021 at 6:29 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Smita Kulkarni

July 4, 2021 at 12:44 PM

Enjoyed reading your poem and the ending was so surprising!! Great job of spraying your love on those words Jo!!

Paula Goldsmith

July 3, 2021 at 12:25 PM

Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Yes, in love with words. Have a blessed day/weekend..................

Charles Messina

July 3, 2021 at 8:56 AM

Jo, this is written so well. I truly love this poem. The whole write from start to finish with the wonderful surprise ending is simply fantastic! Congratulations on your win. Hugs Charlie

Gershon Wolf

June 29, 2021 at 7:42 PM

Killer ending there, Jo. Perfect rendering of how love gets twisted into all sorts of odd shapes by our tortured and torturing minds. G.L. in the contest, Gershon

Heidi Sands

June 28, 2021 at 12:02 PM

I enjoyed this Jo. Yes, we all can relate in our love for words. Creative and special this is :)

Quoth Theraven

June 28, 2021 at 7:46 AM

Jo, Sharing the best you have. This poem sparkles with life in love with words. So quickly we fall in love with yours. -Richard

Supraja Kannan

June 27, 2021 at 3:32 AM

Reads like a winner... No doubt... Lovely climax...

Demetrios Trifiatis

June 26, 2021 at 12:07 PM

When we are in love, either with a person, a thing, or an idea, we become invincible. We become doubly powerful when we are in love with words and especially when words fall in love with our pen as they did here with you, dearest Jo! Hugs . Good luck!

L Milton Hankins

June 26, 2021 at 9:14 AM

Jo, I am in awe of this work of yours. It is exceptionally good, and the surprise at the ending was borne out by the shape. Beautiful work. I wish you all the best in Charles's contest.