Im Free At Last

i dont know why this alwyas happens to me
i get so scared i want to flee
i cant believe the way i went astray from all the pain inside me
i could not gain so i had to be the way i was when you left me
iwanted to be with you until i got old
thats when i thought my heart was sold
instead when i lost you it went cold
now that your gone
i have to be strong 
for the love you gave me 
shall set me free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 3, 2010 at 1:29 PM
Good write.....The poem style is called senryu..it's a form of Japanese poetry meant to be humorous... Sorry you did not like it.....Larry
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