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i dont know why this alwyas happens to me i get so scared i want to flee i cant believe the way i went astray from all the pain inside me i could not gain so i had to be the way i was when you left me iwanted to be with you until i got old thats when i thought my heart was sold instead when i lost you it went cold now that your gone i have to be strong for the love you gave me shall set me free

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Date: 7/3/2010 1:29:00 PM
Good write.....The poem style is called senryu..it's a form of Japanese poetry meant to be humorous... Sorry you did not like it.....Larry
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