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I'M Forever Blowing Bubbles

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Mummy gave us bubbles to blow We watch them dancing too and fro Each bubble bursts we’re full of woe My brother pops some – I shout NO! These transparent orbs, so debonair Their rainbow colors make us stare They scintillate with grace and flair As they rise and fall in the warm air Rhyme me rhyme me a poem Poetry Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper each lines less than 10 syllables checked with HMS rhyming checked with rhymezone Image 2 10/01/21

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/11/2021 10:33:00 AM

I really like the prancy jazziness of this sassy poem Jan

Hilo Poet

Date: 10/6/2021 3:29:00 PM

Tho' a boy--I'm the baby of the brood, older siblings popped away all that I blew. They only stop when I say, "Oh mom...". Memorable posey, "...transparent orbs, so debonair," beautiful Jan! Peace always my friend, Aloha!

Eve Roper

Date: 10/5/2021 8:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jan , great flow. I can just see her getting a little upset at her little brother behind her popping the bubbles. Hugs Eve

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/5/2021 4:18:00 PM

Lovely Jan, your poem takes me back to blowing bubbles in the air… Hugs, Belle :-) xx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/6/2021 1:38:00 PM

I still love getting a tub and having fun Belle!:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin

Date: 10/4/2021 7:47:00 AM

Awesome! That brought back some good childhood memories. Thanks for sharing my friend!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/4/2021 9:47:00 AM

thanks Mark I still love blowing bubbles, its the child in me lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/3/2021 3:15:00 PM

Hello Jan ... blowing bubbles does fascinate kids everywhere - thanks Jan - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2021 4:48:00 PM

I guess I am still a big kid at heart I got some about 4 weeks ago lol:-) hugs jan xx

Emilia James

Date: 10/3/2021 2:28:00 PM

Enjoyed the flow of your bubbles Jan. Took me back to when I was a child. Emilia : )

Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2021 4:47:00 PM

I still love them now Emilia!:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/3/2021 5:47:00 AM

I love your bubbles Jan, well done and best of luck in the contest! Happy Sunday !!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2021 9:13:00 AM

I must be going back to my inner child as i purchased some bubbles the other week lol:-) still cant resist them - my son went ... oh mummmmmmmmm lol:-) hugs Jan x