Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

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I'M Forever Blowing Bubbles

Mummy gave us bubbles to blow
We watch them dancing too and fro
Each bubble bursts we’re  full of woe
My brother pops some – I shout NO!


These transparent orbs, so debonair 
Their rainbow colors make us stare
They scintillate with grace and flair
As they rise and fall in the warm air

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10/01/21

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Caren Krutsinger October 11, 2021 at 10:33 AM I really like the prancy jazziness of this sassy poem Jan

William Kelii Kekaula October 6, 2021 at 3:29 PM Tho' a boy--I'm the baby of the brood, older siblings popped away all that I blew. They only stop when I say, "Oh mom...". Memorable posey, "...transparent orbs, so debonair," beautiful Jan! Peace always my friend, Aloha!

Eve Roper October 5, 2021 at 8:23 PM Congratulations on your win, Jan , great flow. I can just see her getting a little upset at her little brother behind her popping the bubbles. Hugs Eve

Beryl Edmonds October 5, 2021 at 4:18 PM Lovely Jan, your poem takes me back to blowing bubbles in the air… Hugs, Belle :-) xx Jan Allison October 6, 2021 at 1:38 PM I still love getting a tub and having fun Belle!:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin October 4, 2021 at 7:47 AM Awesome! That brought back some good childhood memories. Thanks for sharing my friend! Jan Allison October 4, 2021 at 9:47 AM thanks Mark I still love blowing bubbles, its the child in me lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie October 3, 2021 at 3:15 PM Hello Jan ... blowing bubbles does fascinate kids everywhere - thanks Jan - Lindsay Jan Allison October 3, 2021 at 4:48 PM I guess I am still a big kid at heart I got some about 4 weeks ago lol:-) hugs jan xx

Emilia James October 3, 2021 at 2:28 PM Enjoyed the flow of your bubbles Jan. Took me back to when I was a child. Emilia : ) Jan Allison October 3, 2021 at 4:47 PM I still love them now Emilia!:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile October 3, 2021 at 5:47 AM I love your bubbles Jan, well done and best of luck in the contest! Happy Sunday !! Jan Allison October 3, 2021 at 9:13 AM I must be going back to my inner child as i purchased some bubbles the other week lol:-) still cant resist them - my son went ... oh mummmmmmmmm lol:-) hugs Jan x

Delice Arleen Skelly October 3, 2021 at 3:04 AM This is lovely to read Jan....Delice Jan Allison October 3, 2021 at 8:59 AM Thanks Delice:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May October 2, 2021 at 12:15 PM Lovely write Jan, Best wishes in the Contest Jan Allison October 3, 2021 at 8:58 AM Thanks Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta October 2, 2021 at 11:38 AM Love the way you've captured the moment! Jan Allison October 3, 2021 at 8:58 AM Thanks Rico:-) hugs jan xx

Brian Strand October 2, 2021 at 4:20 AM Good game..good game..Jan ..neat quatrain Jan Allison October 3, 2021 at 8:57 AM thanks Brian:-) hugs jan xx

Victor Buhagiar October 2, 2021 at 1:49 AM You captured the synthesis of your picture very well. Hugs Jan Allison October 3, 2021 at 8:57 AM tanks Victor:-) hugs jan xx

Harry Horsman October 1, 2021 at 6:44 PM You write it so well Jan, in fact beautiful comes to mind. Jan Allison October 3, 2021 at 8:57 AM aww thanks Harry I do write the odd serious poem:-) hugs jan xx