I'M Failing

If it wants to fall soon, let it be all night. The smile of your red lips will be dazzled in moon light. Your bright eyes are like the flame of revolution. Looking at them I find my pain’s solution. You are there in every nook and corner of my mind. I keep on thinking when you will be really so kind! I request you to give me a space inside And take my love in your heart in this sweet night. Today my lips are saying why I'm febrile. Will your lips say that all are futile? If it is so, let me tell you something – I can’t win your heart; I'm failing.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/19/2024 5:47:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/27/2018 6:14:00 PM

Hello Saibal, I like this poem. It sounds to me like a love poem. Well done.

Saibal Ray
Date: 1/27/2018 10:49:00 PM

Thanks Darlene!