I'M Dying Your Laughing

I'm dying your laughing
                              Collapsed emotion renders depression
                                   Repression elapses within me
                                                Blackness
                      Seeping through me like ink dripping on a canvas
                                        My catharsis is over
                 Now I'm left to push the pieces under the floor of my mind
                                                  Why?
                              There's something wrong with me?

                                        Your dying. I'm laughing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Vaso Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 7:11 PM
Wow , what an ending! This is great!
Thornton Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 3:45 PM
AWESOME!! This is an awesome poem Mateu, and I hope you keep sharing more of your writing. "I'm left to push the pieces under the floor of my mind" what a cool line.. actually every line is my fav.. I love reading poetry I find where it feels as if I am the author and it reminds me of who or why I wrote this..again, Great pen~Joel
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