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I'M Dying Your Laughing

I'm dying your laughing Collapsed emotion renders depression Repression elapses within me Blackness Seeping through me like ink dripping on a canvas My catharsis is over Now I'm left to push the pieces under the floor of my mind Why? There's something wrong with me? Your dying. I'm laughing

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/12/2014 7:11:00 PM

Wow , what an ending! This is great!

Joel Thornton

Date: 12/12/2014 3:45:00 PM

AWESOME!! This is an awesome poem Mateu, and I hope you keep sharing more of your writing. "I'm left to push the pieces under the floor of my mind" what a cool line.. actually every line is my fav.. I love reading poetry I find where it feels as if I am the author and it reminds me of who or why I wrote this..again, Great pen~Joel