I'M Dreaming

I dream of you
In the stillness of the night
Your arms are the wind
Holding me tight
Whispering softly
Calling my name
It's your voice I hear, again and again
My heart is full, yet empty too
Because the one thing 
I want and can't have 
Is you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 1:45 PM
That is a great write. it has a powerful flow to it and is just a all around great poem Poe would be proud
Purdum Avatar
November 15, 2008 at 5:25 PM
Beautiful, I'm 45, I guess I write like I'm 19, Fritz Purdum
Yeager Avatar
November 14, 2008 at 7:16 AM
Omg's awsomeness poem reminds me so much of me and my ex..And yea i gots a myspace my email is [email protected] so u can find me i caint talk that much because im kinda in the middle of computer class lol i sould have my profile set to unprivate so its gonna say im 18 lol my school dont allow myspace so i caint get on untill i get home at 4:25 add me when u can otays
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
November 14, 2008 at 5:05 AM
Hi alexz, No I dislike no one. My time is extremely limited. I'm in my sixties ansd have a 7 day work schedule. My family time is also limited. You have some serious self esteem issues to resolve. I am assuming due to the adults in your life. God Bless you young lady and try to understand that you need to be you and to hell with anyone that doesn't accept you as you are. Get some help. Vince
Austin Avatar
November 14, 2008 at 4:56 AM
This flows, oh so nicely, the eternal yearning, always something or someone you can't have. Good write. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver
Malebranche Avatar
November 13, 2008 at 1:49 PM
it's always hard to want something that you can't have...your piece is a great piece to state that...
Davis Avatar
November 13, 2008 at 10:24 AM
nope i don't remember you. did i hang out with you alot?
Watts Avatar
November 12, 2008 at 7:14 AM
i'm home sick today call me
Nicolo Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 7:16 PM
Your poems have a nice rhythm to them and thanks for reading my poem. Ter's a couple of others thst I wrote that you may like as well.
Torres Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 7:55 PM
Alexz sorry I love this poem penned by you not Janice Micahel Torres
Torres Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 7:52 PM
Janice this wonderful. I love this poem .It is truly about love and is one of my favorites about love and loosing someone special. Wow you are truly gifted. Michael Torres
Perkins Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 6:26 PM
youll probably forget about me in like 5 months, dont worry, this will all pass.
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