I'M Done

My words are my inspiration
It’s bigger than the inflation
Im staring at a nation
Listening to my favourite station

You were a part of my life
But you cut it with a knife
I need to strive 
Before I hit this dive

The song in my ear
Takes away my fear
Everything is clear
When I wipe away my tear

Now im done
This is no more fun 
It’s making me run
Away from the sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bekker Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 6:53 AM
Hey Wilma ..Glad you enjoyed it... Will check out our poems as well :) Hey doc ;) thanx
Neels Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 3:49 AM
Interesting write Kobus, I enjoyed it!! Regards Wilma
Mehta Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 7:12 PM
Very interesting rhyming poem.
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