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I'M Done...

I'm Done of getting hurt, By the one I loved. I'm Done of getting smashed, by the sound of nothing at all. I'm so Done with this life I'm in. Want everything to go away. But I know this is not all that's left, so I want to hear what you got to say. Chorus: PLEASE DON'T GO AWAY! PLEASE DON'T GO DOWN THAT PATH AHEAD OF YOU! PLEASE DON'T GO AWAY! PLEASE DON'T HURT YOURSELF! BY GOING DOWN! THIS PATH IN FRONT OF YOU!!! End of Chorus: I'm Done with all of this. This forsaken Island of dreams! Its sinking fast! Without a life boat to see! I'm Trying hard! To take you by the hand! I Tried lots of times, To tell you who I am!! Chorus: PLEASE DON'T GO AWAY! PLEASE DON'T GO DOWN THAT PATH AHEAD OF YOU! PLEASE DON'T GO AWAY! PLEASE DON'T HURT YOURSELF! BY GOING DOWN! THIS PATH IN FRONT OF YOU!!! End of Chorus: I know the path ahead! I know its full of pain! Of time before! Your just going to do it again! I'm Done with this! Trying to help you, get by now! You PUSHED away, all of those who really CARED! FOR YOU! Newish Chorus I'll be waiting here. Until you figure all this out, those who really cared for you. You just pushed away! I hope you see, That I only loved you. But you pushed me away Only you can bring me back. I'M DONE! end of song.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/13/2009 4:21:00 AM
Interesting chorus song poem. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/2/2009 4:21:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry this splendid morning Eric. May you have a beautiful week filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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