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I'm dead

I close my eyes and I breathe no more No more standing at deaths0 door No more struggling just to survive No more machines to keep me alive No more visits from people I don't know No more pity will they have to show No more living in constant pain No more injections ever again No more crying when No body's round No more hiding my unhappy sound No more madness inside my head Everything is OK now I'm dead.

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Date: 7/13/2025 2:50:00 AM
I would imagine this echoes a lot for people. Why are they insistent in keeping people alive to no avail.
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Date: 7/12/2025 1:30:00 PM
Certain times in life can be hard, even maddening, as you say.
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Date: 7/12/2025 1:29:00 PM
For some death can truly be a relief, an end to suffering. Even Job wished for death
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