I'M Coming To Love U Without Mercy

I heard that your smile is 
bleeding
I heard tears wounded your 
cheeks constantly  
I heard you're constantly 
brutalize
By loneliness
Your heart is begging for 
sympathy

So I'm coming to console you, 
I'm coming to love you 
I'm coming to love u without 
mercy

  
My only burden are the 
moonlight that I'm carrying 
upon the countenance my of 
face and the breathtaking 
romance in me. 
My tired feet scale hills, crying 
Twigs trample under my feet 
through valleys
And if i fall on this rugged road
the anxiety to reach you,
Will pulling me up off my knees.
(love is really a journey)

I'm coming to console you 
I'm coming to love you 
I'm coming to love you without 
mercy

terrifying silence screaming out 
from a distance behind me
my skin shivers against 15 
degree
I see the wind softly whisper
in the arms of a tree.
Toads subsequently croaks with 
tones
of jealousy. 

When i reach I'll fill the cracks
of your Heart, and be your 
one and only. 
I coming to love you with a love
that's made to surpass eternity
I'm coming to console you 
I'm coming to love   
I'm coming to love u without 
mercy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/7/2014 8:33:00 PM
Wow! A marvellous work ; from the title to the theme , what a unique work! A great one Adrian. Simply super.
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Date: 2/7/2014 9:55:00 PM
Thank u very much. Thanks for your comment
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