Margarette Mcdonald Poet I do not know?

I'M Broken

My feelings have being crushed
My feelings have being hurt
My feelings are now in the dirt
You made these tears
Opened up new fears
I know the feeling of true pain 
Your ride was insane
Took my heart for a race
Only not to finish
You didn't even come in last place
Hope it was fun
Now that i've landed on the ground
My feelings have being crushed
My feelings have being hurt
Now my feelings sit in the dirt
You woke me up now I'm alert
My heart has being shattered
Now to mend the peices

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Beata Agustin October 21, 2024 at 4:48 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A February 23, 2016 at 10:01 PM margarette mcdonald, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A January 2, 2016 at 12:19 AM MARGARETTE, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF HAPPY 2016. ...... SKAT

Karen Croft March 13, 2011 at 3:35 PM very nice poem.I've felt that feeling a time or two

Julie Heckman March 5, 2011 at 8:21 AM Very heart felt write...take care and don't ever let this happen to you again...good luck, Julie

Marymkilker Marymkilker March 3, 2011 at 10:46 AM How sad for you but this too shall come to pass.